So I read the new tale and I must say... it surprised me, pleasently so, I might add.
-First of all, while the dragon was literal, I'm glad it also was metaphorical: THE INQUISITION! (Which I'm sure nobody was expecting,

)
-I'm happy to see that the inquisition is affecting the power balance in Kerrel, removing power from the nobles, and putting it in the hands of... well, the inquisitors. Also, the good ole' "If I don't do it, then my enemies will", which I also really like.
-It's also good to see that Aridon has still enough spite in him to act against Gardon, even though 1) He's technically a recluse that's reconsidering his entire memories; and 2) Gardon's and Brian's relationship is... lukewarm, to say the least.
-It'd also be nice to see how the inquisition actually operates: Is it like... witch hunters? Some sort of Inteligence Service? Or more like the actual Spanish Inquisition? How quickly do they resort to torture, and how valid do they consider confessions under stress? (Although considering it's literally made of
criminals vigilantes, I'm guessing the answers are "very quickly" and "very valid", respectively). I don't know, it would be nice to know more about the organization itself.
-As for the dragon itself... well, I think that Dorten is just
positevely thrilled. Poor guy's always getting night terrors, courtesy of everyone's favorite lich.
All in all, I liked it.
(PD: A little off topic, but is the fanfiction thread closed, or can stuff still be posted on it?)