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[D a w n]

the arms look strange( how the Hydralisk holds them).

Oh but the Baneling looks awesome

 

[kola]

here is the final Version. in 600x525

 

[Deolrin]

Arms look extremely weird.

 

[kola]

they looks like hydralisk arms?

 

[Deolrin]

Wrong.
Hyrdalisks arms aren't bended over, the spikey stuff on them differ(A LOT), they are shorter and don't have extreme amounts of exposed muscle.



Also, the tail is a little too thin. He looks extremely unbalanced as a whole. Might wanna try redoing him.

 

[kola]

Image

this is the image i checked to do my drawing, there is muscle, why would i want to make an hydralisk exactly like a real one? would just be a waste of time. anyway,

Might wanna try redoing him./QUOTE]

... cmon, u rly think i just though or wanted of remaking him? totaly wrong, too much time to do, u rly doesnt know the time it takes to do a drawing.

 

[Deolrin]

That guy that 'inspired' you redrawed his shit A LOT, from what I can see.

I thought you were drawing for fun?

Anyways, that image you posted. He has more scythe-like\mantis-like hands. They're not straight like in your drawing, they're shorter, they have a lot less muscle, the hands are completely different and the scythe-like things just generally look better.

The Hydralisk also doesn't have these 'fleshy tubes' you drew. The ones from which the scythe-like things come out. They just look bad and they don't exist.

Anyways, I like your baneling. It's not bad. It's pretty damn awesome actually. I just don't really like your hydralisk. He looks way too unbalanced, it looks like he'll have a hard time standing. His proportions along with other things are completely off.

why would i want to make an hydralisk exactly like a real one? would just be a waste of time.

All I have to say is 'lol'. It's like saying "why would I want to draw a human that looks like a real human? It would just be a waste of time".

 

[kola]

debode, seriously, i take INSPIRATION from the hydralisk i sent on last post, and i didnt want to draw it the same way, and yeah, its pretty normal that my hydralisk isnt as good as his one, hes a pro artist, i started to draw 8 months ago... and you rly cant compare humans to hydralisks becuz humans are real, hydralisks are just imagination. anyway, i'll stop talking about that hydralisk, this weekend, i'll draw a new zerg, still deosnt know what one.

Maybe i'll draw something else then a serg, im still not decided.

 

[Deolrin]

Hey, might I suggest a Lurker? ^^

(Don't get me wrong btw, all those comments... I didn't mean to offend you or whatever. Just trying to... Help you, I guess. Critique... And stuff... >.>)

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Some hidden tags on that big image may be healthy

Yours looks kinda odd like everyone said in its pose. Other then that it seems fine though (the tail may be too thin as aforementioned)

 

[kola]

Some Wip.

 

[Arowanna]

I like the shading of that arm, but the proportions are all wrong.
The upper arm looks very long and a bit hulky, while the lower arm looks kinda small and skinny.
My guess is that you're trying to bring the arm closer to us, but it looks like it's pointing downward.
And for the hand and dagger/sword, where's the thumb and the looks a bit "bent".

Hope you understand that this is critique

 

[kola]

i know that the proportions are wrong, but i draw things and i try to make them with good proportions but if they are wrong, i can just make the sizes good when i resive everything. all parts are different layers.

closer to us, but it looks like it's pointing downward./QUOTE] its actualy the both at the same time

so, i'll cut a bit of the Upper arm, I'll make the Lower Arm bigger, (The Bracer too), I'll Make the Hand Bigger (even if i wouldnt make the lower arm bigger, i would have to make it bigger), I'll change the place of the handle in the hand, and will remake the blade.

Seriously, idk, but the hands looks like weird to me.. anyway, if u find something weird on it, just say it plz.

New Wip.

Im slowly advancing, but maybe, someday, i'll finish it.

 

[HappyCockroach]

i know that the proportions are wrong, but i draw things and i try to make them with good proportions but if they are wrong, i can just make the sizes good when i resive everything. all parts are different layers.
so, i'll cut a bit of the Upper arm, I'll make the Lower Arm bigger, (The Bracer too), I'll Make the Hand Bigger (even if i wouldnt make the lower arm bigger, i would have to make it bigger), I'll change the place of the handle in the hand, and will remake the blade.

kola, the techniques you possess to make your drawing are incredible. The shadings, the materials, the contrast, it's perfect.
But you should make an schematic sketch before starting. Like some pose study, and anatomy review.

This drawing you have made is a sword, being held by a hand, that comes out of a forearm, connected to an arm, then to a chest.

This is wrong. You should first think it through in your head - how is the creature going to look agressive? - and imagine the exact pose you want to draw. Then you sketch the anatomy, as a whole. When you see it looks coherent, pleasant to the eye, you start with the drawing itself. It'll turn out hundred times more awesome.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

It looks like you've drawn a left arm with a right hand and a right shoulder armour. Like HC suggested, make a full sketch before you start working in details, colour and shading.

 

[kola]

hmm, will think about it for next drawing HPC, but shiik, i doesnt understand what u mean when u says i've drawn a left arm, everything in the arm is like a right arm.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

It's hard to see it if you've done it yourself, usually, but I did a quick sketch of an "outer arm" so that you might notice the similarities. The problem lies in you using this "outer arm" that ought to be the left arm of your character as the right arm.

(Yeah, my drawing ain't exactly in perfect proportion, it just demonstrates what I mean.)

 

[kola]

i see what u mean, but this wouldnt be possible cuz of the pose.

the lower arm is going to right, so, i rly think the arm is ok.

 

[kola]

Deathwing

image

 

[SasuhKun]

oooo, Creepy.

 

[kola]

Worm Angel lol wtf.

Image

 

[SasuhKun]

Right... the drawing is good, but... ahn.

 

[NFWar]

All worms are going to heven

 

[PROXY]

muahah, that worm is GODLY

 

[kola]

Kil'jaeden and a Map i did for Wc4 : Sc2

u can see that my kil'jaeden is from the Map (but i made it just that i used it in that drawing)

Images

 

[D a w n]

Kiljaeden and Lady Vashj look really childish. I'm not sure if it's your intention or not but it does not really fit. A darker,evil maybe even some kind of dirty look would make it appear much more interesting and credible, at least to me.

 

[kola]

well, i see what u mean (but i see it more on lady vashj), but im not going to change it. aleardy spent too much time on this lol. but yeah if i remake an evil dude, i'll think about it.

 

[Arisato]

.... you're drawings are rrrrealy nice but erhm... every face starts with a circle, then a thin line passes through , coz a face is a is like a mirror from the left to right (except it's hair)

your shading everything, is perfect.

just the shape and.. i remembered the elite warrior you painted( using your hand?? idk)

it looks like an egg, coz the circle is like at the center of it's face and theres 2 more little circles on upper and below.. that looks damn funny, but goodluck ! i like your drawings, except that eggie face

 

[kola]

a face is not a circle, its a reversed egg.

 

[Arisato]

no, a circle then put the chin below it

look at your face, is it an egg?

egg has no edges, but humans does, look at your skull == is it even an egg?

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

no, a circle then put the chin below it

look at your face, is it an egg?

egg has no edges, but humans does, look at your skull == is it even an egg?

Well thats what the human skull looks like, but I'm pretty sure for the original base before adding edges to it they use an upside down egg - at least that's how every book I've seen on drawing a human face showed the initial sketches to look like

 

[kola]

this was posted on this thread by noob134, check the shape of the first head. looks a lot like a reversed egg.

 

[Deolrin]

Uh, dude... Kinda obvious to see.

HUMAN ≠ EGG

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Hence the word "initial"

Heads don't have a definitive shape, but something to start as a base before adding details is an upside down egg. And if you use a sphere with a sort of box for a chin, it's going to end up looking pretty awkward.

 

[kola]

debode, its kinda obvious (too) that an egg is Alot similar to a human head shape. like wherewolf said, it is a base to after add details.

 

[Miss_Foxy]

The dragon looks pretty adorable But I can't really tell what the other two are, sorry...

 

[Deolrin]

Your human heads look very much like non-changed eggs.

 

[Miss_Foxy]

What's a non-changed egg?

 

[kola]

Your human heads look very much like non-changed eggs.

lol and the funniest in all this, is that i didnt even use this technic for the humans i did on the thread.

i did 1 human on this thread and, its a long time ago. and plz could u freaking stop arguing about this.

 

[Arisato]

==a? i'm not arguing with you, i just kept laughing and laughing seeing those things
that eggy faced guy lawl

and i'm just trying to tell you that err, read again up there

oh and a

WhereWolfTherewolf:
Well thats what the human skull looks like, but I'm pretty sure for the original base before adding edges to it they use an upside down egg - at least that's how every book I've seen on drawing a human face showed the initial sketches to look like

well, that means our line of art is not same my line of art is at animes and mangas

 

[kola]

oh, i was talking to debode and, mangas head arent real head if u didnt know lol.

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

@ sorry if this is getting slightly off topic

well, that means our line of art is not same my line of art is at animes and mangas

Well I'm not really all that good at art, and I pretty much fail whenever I try and a draw a human face (no clue why this subject hangs me up, I can draw pretty much anything else, from buildings to animals to internal spaces in buildings at a passable level, yet I always screw up on faces) but even Anime/Manga style drawing books have shown the initial sketches in reverse egg style.

 

[Arisato]

manga art tech is using the real human skull + face, if they want to make a cool guys face they make it like a perfect faced handsome human, now that's unreal!

except if they wanted to make it real-like just add some wrinkles add some fat in their face etc etc!

 

[kasame]

yay ^^ your pics are great ) thumbs up!!

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Oddly enough, for an Asian form of drawing, the character's don't normally look too Asian in Manga - I mean they draw characters with wide open large circular eyes.

Nothing racist, it's just that if you look at people who are ethnically Chinese or Japanese, they normally naturally have more squinted eyes.

 

[Deolrin]

A guy explained that to me once. Apparently it has something to do with the Eastern culture as opposed to the Western culture. They believe eye expressions project feelings better than mouth expression or something, but maybe I misunderstood. Thus - big eyes, small mouths.

Oh, and Kola, I personally think that your Banneling was the best art you've done so far that you have showed in here. Perhaps you could try something else with that "style" or something? Because it's really great.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Well if you look at any given Anime, you'll see that the eyes do play a significant role in projecting somebody's feelings.

 

[kola]

Here is a Wip. Going to finish it tomorow i think.

this is Full size btw.

 

[Arowanna]

Looks good, but the boat looks really it's really tiny

And why do you draw in that small size mate?

 

[kola]

lol i started in something like 1000x700 but after 20 min of drawing i did like. omg i will never finish the damn sea, so i cut down a bit of the size. same thing 20 min later and another time after i dont kpow how much time. so now its like 430x300 lawl