my drawings

[-Berz-]

Hehe, cute

I noticed that the inside of the ear is wrong, the hole should be down to the head not up, and ear is overall weird attached

 

[kola]

something I am currently working on..

It looks like the Dreadmist set of WoW.. but i swear, i didn't know that set before today when my bro told me : Hey.. you are drawing the dreadmist set?.. then he showed it to me and i was like.. omg it's the same thing lool..
anyways.. here it is.

 

[kola]

Finished Version. He is summoning an Imp.

 

[HappyCockroach]

outstanding color treatment and drawing techniques, but horrible perspective and anatomy.

you should practice doing sketches...

 

[Deolrin]

What HappyCockroach just said. The anatomy is terrible, like in most of your icons. Hands and legs are always screwed up.

 

[kola]

outstanding color treatment and drawing techniques, but horrible perspective and anatomy.

you should practice doing sketches...

could you show me what parts are bad? I would appreciate it.

 

[HappyCockroach]

could you show me what parts are bad? I would appreciate it.

the problem is exactly there. you make your drawing by parts. that's why it ends up all screwed up.
you should first do the base drawing, with the pose and the anatomy sketched. then, when you see it looks right, you give it color treatment

 

[kola]

the problem is exactly there. you make your drawing by parts. that's why it ends up all screwed up.
you should first do the base drawing, with the pose and the anatomy sketched. then, when you see it looks right, you give it color treatment

how can you say that if you didn't even see any wips before those 2?

 

[Arowanna]

You start with simple figures; boxes, ovals and lines.

Kola, if I got the time later today, I'll try to give you some ideas of how to fix your anatomy.
Just a warning however, anatomy takes years to master correctly and I'm not a
professional, but I should be able to give you a couple of tips.

Edit
This thread contains a post by me that might give you a general idea of how to fix it.
I'll look in to your drawing later, when I got the time.

 

[Fjury]

outstanding color treatment and drawing techniques, but horrible perspective and anatomy.

you should practice doing sketches...

Totally agree with this post. :>

 

[kola]

Thx arowanna.. you are the first to try helping me.. but your post on that other thread can't really help me because I already make this (i didn't know a human body was 6 heads tall.. but i just checked very fast and he is 6 heads tall).. What I want to know is not technics, but what isn't working on that drawing.

 

[kola]

A drawing I made sometime ago..

 

[kola]

A mage making some kind of spell (in the air)
and.. yes i know.. she has no head.. I wasn't happy with the face and the hair I made so I just removed it.. I'll remake it later XD

 

[-Berz-]

Looks good so far but legs are too short compared to the rest of the body. Else maybe fix belly/chest part a bit and the boobs are to round imo.

 

[kola]

Berz : I couldn't agree with you for the legs, i followed the size of the 7 head for the body and i think it's alright this way..

For the boobs, trust me I tried.. but it just didn't look good compared to this..

I tried a new way to color it.. didn't take very long but I like it

 

[HappyCockroach]

Thx arowanna.. you are the first to give me try helping me..

if you can't see, i'm actually trying to help you. but rather not saying anything at all.

the last drawing you made is quite anatomically satisfactory if you ask me

 

[kola]

if you can't see, i'm actually trying to help you. but rather not saying anything at all.

the last drawing you made is quite anatomically satisfactory if you ask me

thx.

sry for saying it this way.. You were the first to say me my drawing was incorrect, it's all right, but it's not helping me at all if you don't say me why it's incorrect

 

[kola]

God of War fanart
Kratos

I think I'm going to finish it, but not today

What I really want to know is if it's all proportional..

 

[Fjury]

From what I can see now is the forehead is to large and that the lips doesn't really look like lips. Try to shape them more like this attachment.

 

[kola]

I'll do something for the upper lip but, I'm not sure of how the forehead is too large?..

 

[Fjury]

I'll do something for the upper lip but, I'm not sure of how the forehead is too large?..

Perhaps is it just me who's crazy
But I think that the forehead is Sliiiightly~ to high.

 

[kola]

Yeah, I think you're right, I'll lower it a bit.

 

[kola]

Updated
better?.. By the way, i didn't update only the forehead and the lips, I added blood and added some little things there and there.

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

That definitely makes the lips a bit more realistic

 

[Fjury]

looks good :>

 

[kola]

Here is the final version

 

[-Berz-]

Quite nice, you're really getting better and better with each piece.

 

[kola]

Wip.. I still need to finish the guitar and i'll add some other things.

 

[kola]

finished it

EDIT: yeah.. changed the background

 

[HappyCockroach]

very nice.

 

[Arisato]

personally, the guitar looks very unrealistic(shape)
the person and the pose are all awesome, if this were to be rated,i'll give it 5/5 !

 

[Orcnet]

nicely made art! good job with the drawings especially Kronos

 

[kola]

nicely made art! good job with the drawings especially Kronos

thanks, but his name is kratos . from the game God of War

 

[Orcnet]

kronos, kratos, arthas? LOL! got dizzy with them names. oh well. I dig the drawing dude

 

[kola]

Dark side of the moon

15-20 minutes drawing

 

[kola]

A fish bowl...

i tried some new way to draw..

 

[kola]

some landscape

 

[kola]

Self Portrait :

and Another dark side of the moon because my old one looks like crap :

 

[adrianwho]

That looks awesome although you ruined the eyes a bit on tthe third drawing. The eyes should acctyally show but if you want it that way, keep it. I'm just saying my oppinion but it looks almost perfect. It looks non-zeratul but 60% darktemplar. I love starcraft so I might know pretty much lots about it and the head just makes the darktemplar image fade away. But maybe you though of making an older darktemplar so yea... I might think that he/she might looks almost like that. You are 95% way to perfection in this drawing.