Terraining Contest #8 - Steampunk

[bigapple90]

where is Midgar???

 

[Oziris]

WIP 4
-Added a sky.
-Deleted the Globe.
-Added more detail.

 

[bigapple90]

Thats pretty sweet

 

[thedeathunterxx]

wow thats sweet ozirus, although the sky in the back, u can tell that that sky is UBER cloud because you see the atmosphere curve. I suggest making it 5 times bigger or something.

other then that nice atmosphere. GJ.

Ohh and im pretty sure we said that all the terrains in this contest are gonna look very alike.

 

[Oziris]

I made the clouds bigger as you said thedeathunterxx. I think it looks better then the WIP4.

 

[Celaquil]

My entry.

 

[raid1000]

awesome idea
but work more on the ground...
moar tree variation plx

 

[Celaquil]

I might consider doing that

Since it is still a work in progress.

 

[Revolve]

Yeah Keiji that looks awsome, but needs some work. Ground could be a bit more variated, and the steam looks a bit odd, IMO, perhaps it could be smoother.

 

[Belgarath]

looking a bit too futuristic imo, keiji, maybe a little more steam and gears would fix that. The islands are quite nice, though i'd attach the main island with the main tree island. to be honest, the ground, at the moment, looks pretty bad, the tree variation is well, non-existent, and the snow is pretty repetitive to look at, personally i'd block out most of the ground by either raising everything higher up and tuning the fog up a bit, making it seem more airy, maybe have some tree tips and crowns showing through the smoke.

 

[Chaos.]

Meh WIP #1 - Steam Powered Robots.



Still have to finish the robot in the background and then add in some smaller detail.

So does it fit teh theme?

 

[Revolve]

Looks very cool tbh And yeah, I'd say it matches the theme.

 

[FamousPker49]

So I guess I'll drop a WIP. It's a submarine bursting into a soon to be Steam Punk Port.

 

[Arcany]

Pyramidhe@d recently released some nice steampunk stuff, linking it here for those not yet aware of this pack: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/packs-542/gears-stuff-146147/

 

[Celaquil]

Why look who's here, Pker.

Also, a slight update on my terrain.

 

[L2love]

Um things involving WIP's dose it matter if its not vary close 2 finishing or it doesn't have any background of anything?

 

[FamousPker49]

Nope. Look at mine, it looks like shit right now. That's why it's a Work In Progress.

 

[Chaos.]

WIP #2.

-Finished the robot in the back.
-Tiny details.



C & C please.

 

[Revolve]

Robots= Win
Sky= Awsome

Keep it up!

 

[Celaquil]

This will be my final, good luck to you all.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

thank the gods im not in this contest, because i would surly loose. I am very bad at constructing futuristic, complicated things.

Btw. This will be a tie betwee n Famous, Keiji and Chaos. I REALLY like Chaoses robots so far. And Famouses is looking reall scary

EDIT : WOW CHAOS i just notcied those 2 Sunflare circles. You have my vote on this contest. Thats just pretty damn good. The placement and size is perfect.

 

[Chaos.]

wow thanks. At the moment I'm just experiment, but I think it's about done as is. Anything else I try adding in makes it look spammed. Any ideas on what i should add/remove/change? Or should I just leave it as is?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Chaos. You should change the red fog for a more Orange Fog.. Because it doesn't look natural at all when it's red D:

Your concept is epic, and so is the sky.. tought, try changing the fog

 

[FamousPker49]

Did a little bit of work on it. Not sure what to do with the foreground. Maybe I will continue the city, or something. I don't like the rail going underground. Or at least how I did it.

 

[Oziris]

Update: Added Sun Flare and the Old Geezer.

 

[Chaos.]

Well I tried changing the fog. Which one is better?



I kind of like the sky in the original (second) better. Also in the first you cant really see the robot on the right as much. I'm kind of leaning towards the second (original). Opinions?

 

[Celaquil]

Definetively the first one, just feels right.

And Pker, you better work on that terrain >.>

 

[FamousPker49]

Or what? WAHT IF THAT IS MY FINAL SUBMISSION?

 

[Megafyr]

Then your final terrain has a very empty foreground.

Chaos, the first fog is indeed better.

 

[Chaos.]

Ya, the more I compared the two the more I agree.

So, unless anybody else has any other suggestions, this is my final.



-Added sun flares at the bottom
-Used orange fog.
-Extended the foreground a barely noticeable amount.

 

[Celaquil]

Or what? WAHT IF THAT IS MY FINAL SUBMISSION?

Then you, sir, is an awfully lazy ass of a terrainer, nearly as lazy as Gilles <.<

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Ya, the more I compared the two the more I agree.

So, unless anybody else has any other suggestions, this is my final.

View attachment 67475

-Added sun flares at the bottom
-Used orange fog.
-Extended the foreground a barely noticeable amount.

MUCH BETTER! this terrain looks epic .

 

[The Panda]

You guys are crazy when it comes to terraining. Nice job!

 

[Ham Ham]

Chaos, the fog on your pic.. well... it looks like if it cuts the terrain in 2. You should increase the fog far distance to make it soft. And increase the field of view. It looks like if the robot are walking into an abiss
Otherwise, great pic.

Its pretty hard making Steampunk with the limited model section for warcraft. it looked very changeling. Too sad I just found this thread today and coudnt work on it =/

 

[raid1000]

awesome shit you guys got there
this will be a photo finish!

 

[Oziris]

Nobody commented on my Sun Flares, i wanna know if they are good or not >.<

 

[raid1000]

Nobody commented on my Sun Flares, i wanna know if they are good or not >.<

sunflares are ok imo

 

[FamousPker49]

"Taking a step out of his home, he views the return of the great submarine, Rust Rocket, bursting out of the water into the port that sits below the great Gear Tower. The smell of the forge drifts through his nose as he runs his hand through his hair with the ocean mist gently laying dew upon his face"

I guess final or some shit. Also, lame description.

 

[Revolve]

foreground and mountains in background could definently need some work imo. Everything else looks awsome.

 

[FamousPker49]

Yeah foreground I wasn't sure what to do. :/ and what's wrong with the mountains?

 

[Revolve]

For foreground, I suggest you extend the city, and some buildings, steamy buildings and such.

And by mountains, I think they ook a bit unreal. They are kind of high (and kind of low at some points) maybe smooth it out? No need to.
Also, you should either remove the trees, or spam them an creating a forest like apperance.

 

[FamousPker49]

Yeah alright that's what I was thinking with the foreground. But I gotta keep it somewhat open/plain so you can still see the submarine well. At least on the left part.

And I didn't want a bunc of trees where they wouldnt actually grow lol.

 

[Celaquil]

"Taking a step out of his home, he views the return of the great submarine, Rust Rocket, bursting out of the water into the port that sits below the great Gear Tower. The smell of the forge drifts through his nose as he runs his hand through his hair with the ocean mist gently laying dew upon his face"

I guess final or some shit. Also, lame description.

The sky and the background doesn't blend, thats one of the first rules of a good terrain >.> Your getting sloppy Pker <.<

 

[FamousPker49]

Hmm good call. I never really noticed it.

 

[Chaos.]

24 hours people. Please let there be more submisions. Cause 4 = phail.

 

[Belgarath]

24 hours people. Please let there be more submisions. Cause 4 = phail.

there was a model contest with 3 once i believe
famous, that looks a bit like jumbled stoof around here and there

 

[FamousPker49]

You obviously do not see what is there then. It's a clockwerk port. PRECISELY TUNED

 

[Oziris]

There are five submisions. Cobra, Keiji, Pker49, Chaos and me.

 

[Celaquil]

So.. The-Raven and Real Impact doesnt count either... ? <.<

That makes 7 contestants.

 

[Oziris]

Oh sorry. I forgot ^^'