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14:06, 1st Oct 2009
Zombie.: Tbh, I recall seeing better than this from you. The shape is wrong, the shading is messed up, the color scheme is lacking and the whole thing misses details. First of all, try getting a good picture to reference from, at least do the outlines accordingly. As soon as it's done, try a lighter grey for the blade, add more details, like sub-parts, decorations, marks and damage marks. The highlights are overdone, they take too much of a space and the one on the handle is on the wrong side. Try to scale them down, so parts of the blade are visible.
Rejected until updated.
Zombie.: Tbh, I recall seeing better than this from you. The shape is wrong, the shading is messed up, the color scheme is lacking and the whole thing misses details. First of all, try getting a good picture to reference from, at least do the outlines accordingly. As soon as it's done, try a lighter grey for the blade, add more details, like sub-parts, decorations, marks and damage marks. The highlights are overdone, they take too much of a space and the one on the handle is on the wrong side. Try to scale them down, so parts of the blade are visible.
Rejected until updated.