My skin

[kris4o]

My giant skin

y.
I have maked a skin but its not
enought good to be approved pls help.

Here is the skin.

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[Dentothor]

try posting it in jpeg so people wont have to bother downloading it and converting it. Because no one is going to want to go through all that trouble just to give a suggestion.

 

[kris4o]

What do you thing about my skin.

 

[The_Silent]

What did the moderator say since it didn't get approved. Looks quite good

 

[kris4o]

Yes but its not enought.
For that i need help from you all.
To give me some ideas to say what i need to do.
And do you thing that the skin is ready for uploading?Yes or not.

 

[-Grendel]

find a much more fitting color scheme for it

 

[Dentothor]

Its still incredibly messy. in comparison to the old one, its an improvement, but this is still a little ways away from being approved. I know you have this kind of fear of the skin looking monotone, but we dont want a rainbow (and honestly i think you have all 7 colours of the whole damn rainbow).
dont pick colours from the opposite ends of the spectrum where it doesnt compliment the skin. Like the eyes. the green can compliment the blue, but with that colour of clothing, its a very conflicting colour.you need to focus on what looks good, and not just what works.
adding texture to differentiate skin from cloth is good too.you dont need to have an opposite colour to represent the clothing. Just a good texture difference . Other than that, yes its an improvement. Is it approvable, Not at all at this point. but continue trying.

~Dentothor

you should follow the advice i gave you...

 

[kris4o]

ok ok.
But do it is ready for uploading.
Do my skin have chance to be approved.

Here is the update.

 

[Dentothor]

you didnt change anything....

 

[The_Silent]

You changed eye form?

 

[kris4o]

yes becouse it is not on the right place.
Well i edited the face the cloth and some parts of the legs.

 

[Dentothor]

i honestly see next to no difference on the model.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Why is his jacket cut into pieces? How do the pieces stick onto his body? What's going on in his solar plexus? The darker blue part in the middle of his upper body. What are all the crackles in his face? It seems to me that his face is made out of blue, monotone bark. His arm is a mess of curvy lines, try to make it more simple. Lastly, reduce the saturation of the brown and yellow to get a less contrasted look and apply some darker shading.

 

[Ceaps]

Wow i think its cool.
But shiik is riight.

 

[kris4o]

Ok i finished it.
What do you think now.

http://wardeens.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=128307251

http://wardeens.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=128307252

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[Ceaps]

i think its nice.
The arms look more better yhat before.
And of course the face is my favorite part of the skin.

 

[kris4o]

Thanks but tell me do the skin i ready for uploading.
Do it have a chance to be approved.

 

[Dentothor]

not at all.

 

[kris4o]

What do you think now.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

How does the skin look like when wrapped on the model?

 

[Weep]

I'm surprised this was rejected. There are skins of worse quality in the archive, although they were accepted a long time ago.

 

[kris4o]

i have seen some of them.
But do you think it will be approved.