Dark Horde Race

[Resyak]

A rather precarious job with many shortcomings, first of all the hotkeys, which are basic for a race to be playable. On the other hand and much more critical, the heroes are not limited, you can train infinite identical heroes. Also, with all the custom models that there are in the forum, using models with changed color or enlarged (something very uncomfortable when playing) is quite shabby. Also, the level of customization of skills is quite low and well, the balance is non-existent.

Don't take it the wrong way, I encourage you to continue and improve little by little, but honestly, I read a post of yours in which you said that you were not a novice so I downloaded this with quite high expectations and it has been very disappointing. I don't think you should continue creating new races, try to improve and polish this one because it lacks a lot to be acceptable.

Regards.

 

[deepstrasz]

Mainly an orc edit.
Two units with Ensnare doesn't make sense and could be overpowered.

Please check higher quality altered melee maps for future reference.

Simple.

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[SebaTheLord]

A rather precarious job with many shortcomings, first of all the hotkeys, which are basic for a race to be playable. On the other hand and much more critical, the heroes are not limited, you can train infinite identical heroes. Also, with all the custom models that there are in the forum, using models with changed color or enlarged (something very uncomfortable when playing) is quite shabby. Also, the level of customization of skills is quite low and well, the balance is non-existent.

Don't take it the wrong way, I encourage you to continue and improve little by little, but honestly, I read a post of yours in which you said that you were not a novice so I downloaded this with quite high expectations and it has been very disappointing. I don't think you should continue creating new races, try to improve and polish this one because it lacks a lot to be acceptable.

Regards.

i know your critism is accurate but let me explain something

Infinite Heroes: so i didn't knew how to make hero limit (and now i know)

Hot Keys: and i didn't know how to make letters orange to make hot keys (and now i know)

also there are other problems about that map like 2 units with ensnare weird abilities etc.

Regards.

 

[Resyak]

i know your critism is accurate but let me explain something

Infinite Heroes: so i didn't knew how to make hero limit (and now i know)

Hot Keys: and i didn't know how to make letters orange to make hot keys (and now i know)

also there are other problems about that map like 2 units with ensnare weird abilities etc.

Regards.

Don't worry, we all have to learn. Ask in the forum or download quality maps to see how things are done, so you can polish your projects before uploading them.

Regards.