Well, first off, welcome to the hive!
Now, this is just for constructional purposes, so listen up and it'll help you a lot. =)
+ = Pro
- = Con
Storyline: 5/10
+ The storyline is interesting, reminds me of CotN
- The storyline wasn't too clear, you should elaborate more about the artifacts.
- You should have added the portion where they get stolen, or at least have made it recognizable somehow.
Cameras: 4/10
+ Cameras had good positions, easy to see what they were focusing on.
- Cameras didn't move, they stood still
Terrain: 3/10
+ You knew what the terrain was
- Plain
- No atmosphere, weather, or sky
- Needs tile variation and more terrain completion
Music: 5/10
+ Had actual music
+ Didn't have original melee music
- Warcraft music, and only like one song played
Dialogue: 7/10
+ Flawless grammar
+ Understandable
+ Good waits
- More could be added to elaborate on the storyline
Entertainment: 5/10
+ It was interesting to find out what happened
- For the above reasons, it wasn't as entertaining as I thought'd be.
Total: 4.8333..
You must have at least an average of 8.2 or higher (at least in my opinion, unless needs some work) to have it accepted to the cinema.
I'm sorry. You must make total revisions on the above mentioned. I congratulate you on your effort but it wasn't enough to pass.
If you revise and update it, they could be accepted depending on their scores.
Don't let this get you down because everyone has to start somewhere and it is hard at first, most of the time at least.
Have a nice day.
